I am committed to portraying the violent word in a low level of visual. It’s all about what the characters are thinking and feeling. How the characters act is off camera so to speak.
I have been heavily criticized for not putting insects in and focusing on the dirt: ie. Underground Seattle in my Aaron adventures.
1. Aaron is finding the tunnel before any current people went down there.
2. I was postulating what the area was like back then. I know that is still dirt only and I didn’t want to touch anything.
For these reasons, I wrote it as I did. I apologize if the insects were left out. I had a lot to say in only 10,000 words.